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Broken Star - Lineart portrait by nachtwulf Broken Star - Lineart portrait by nachtwulf
This will have a cooler title once I get color on it. Anyway, tight lineart for a portrait image of my Twilight-Caste Exalt, Broken Star... not in scraps 'cause I like it too much to hide there.

The thing in his mouth, incidentally, is the firing match for his firegun weaponry. He habitually chews on it... either that, or he favors a pipe.
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blueboobaby Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2005
this is one of my favorites so far...the match is a good touch, but I like his scars or scrapes whatever they are...they add character...I think there what makes him look like something more than deftly drawn clean lines
lunasparks Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005
:clap: coolness!
Uftaki Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005
Lovely lineart.... He looks cool! :D I love the design and the detail of the circle in the background... :3
Fleetrun Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005
As always, your lineart is so smooth ^^ I like the little flame-stick (not exactly sure what it should be called) he has in his mouth
AlaskanExile Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
You do such great line art! Sometimes I like it better than your colored versions. It's detailed without the details feeling forced. Very nice!
FiredancerAtrea Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005  Professional General Artist
:jawdrop: OMG!!!

I love this!

....Have you been in my head recently? I am asking this strange question because without the scars on his face, this looks like a character in my upcoming book called Project M.A.L.A.I. (it is actualy a joint effort to get this thing finnished, so technicaly it isn't just mine).

I know you haven't stolen it, and I'm not implying it either, but DAMN! He is the spitting image of Jadk, chewing feddish and goggles included!

^^; you wouldn't mind if I link this pic when he comes up in the chapters, would you? I have several others agreeing to let their art be linked because their pics largely inspired the characters of the book or look so much like them by chance.
nachtwulf Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005
Well, he might not look so much like yours when he's colored... Star's hair and scars both are metallic silver... he's God-blooded, not entirely human. But I suppose you can link if you want to... there's some other pictures of Broken Star in my scraps gallery too.
FiredancerAtrea Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005  Professional General Artist
Ok, thanks, I greatly appreciate it:D

Keep up the good work!
jemisard Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005  Professional Writer
Twilights are awesome (Exalted player and storyteller)

I love the movement of the picture, he looks like he has been caught in the middle of turning to look at the viewer which is very cool.

Will undoubtedly look a hundred times better in colour, but it looks pretty damn awesome as is. The circle is beautiful, the interweaving curcuitry look is very cool.
GarentGurl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005
My head is spinning, I`m :giggle:ing so much I`m :puke:ing and I feel :drunk: although I didn`t drink nothin. It`s that :crazy: feeling that no one really wants to know about. :nod: if agree. :please: :nod or I`ll do the puppy dog eyes like i`m being :innocent:
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